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Don't just look at the big action; look for the details. Is there a specific object? A change in light? According to DailyMotion's writing guide , adding sensory details helps readers visualize the scene.

A first draft (often called a "rough draft" or "zero draft") doesn't need to be perfect. Its job is just to exist on the page so you can edit it later. g60603.mp4

Use words like first, then, next, and finally to keep the sequence of events clear for your audience. Don't just look at the big action; look for the details